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Tuesday, February 21, 2012

Its fine with me


Its fine with me if you have forgotten your promises for me
atleast tell me what punishment you wish for me
Its fine with me if you have forgotten me completely
atleast tell me how do i forget you
Its fine with me if you make love with someone very smart
atleast tell me how do i get you out of my heart
Its fine with me if people call me an idiot
atleast tell me how to be clever like you

Its fine with me if you laugh at me now
atleast tell me how to fake that smile for now
its fine with me if you dont care for me now
atleast tell me how to be carefree like you

Its fine with me if you call me a stranger now
atleast for sometime you were mine
Its fine with me if you treat my love as "price-less"
atleast tell me whose love have you treated as "priceless

PS : Its Just a Poem !!!
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10 comments:

  1. Azra RaphaelFebruary 21, 2012 at 6:24 PM

    dude!! that was freaking daebak! (aka awesome). loved the poem so effing much! can feel it resonating within me even now..

    "it's fine with me that you write such amazing poems,
    at least tell me how i should be inspired like you"

    corny? my bad!

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  2. Dee........February 21, 2012 at 6:43 PM

    Awesome ....
    good try... PS : Its Just a Poem !!!

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  3. Mr.MiglaniFebruary 21, 2012 at 7:59 PM

    @raphael
    ur words means a lot to me
    i m just a part time poet ;)

    Ps: love someone , lose someone u ill b inspired !! ;)
    i dont kno why i write such saddy poems , i m not sure
    but sure u can try..

    thanks lot again.

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  4. Mr.MiglaniFebruary 21, 2012 at 8:00 PM

    @DEE
    its just a poem ;)
    thanks

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  5. DineshFebruary 27, 2012 at 12:50 PM

    awesome bro ... :)

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  6. C.S.HMay 29, 2012 at 6:26 PM

    I like how at the end you always say, PS It's just a poem.. Maybe I should put that down after mine.. that way people wont get the wrong idea.. LOL! This was lovely as well.. I have a feeling you're really good at putting yourself in other's shoes.. something else I've been working on with some of my stuff.. and basically not writing down what you feel but writing down what others may be feeling.. You're very good at that!

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    1. Mr.MiglaniMay 29, 2012 at 10:34 PM

      Thanks a lot for ur wonderful comments ;)
      thanks a lot !

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    2. UnknownJuly 19, 2012 at 3:21 AM

      Totally agree with Crystal,

      it doesnt have to be you who passed through
      it could be your eyes seeing others
      seeing what there laying and you catch up and try to draw it for us to live it with you :)

      i liked it alot

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    3. Mr.MiglaniJuly 19, 2012 at 8:50 AM

      Thanks Radwa pony , thanks for liking it !!!!

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