It's time for our challenge, Three Things You Could Have Done Better.
This is a prompt to challenge you to write of feelings, emotions, reconciliation, acceptance... Are you going to write a letter to your love? Or do you think you should visit someone, explain yourself.
The prompt suggests First Person POV, but it's up to you.
Well Rahul, you got me with that Facebook comment thingy. I don't know where they went. Onto fb probably, but it caught me! Really enjoyed your poem. Lovely emotion, yet sad.
Hey Denise , Thanks for visiting and encouraging.Thanks a lot.The Facebook comments are visible to me !!!! Anyways they went to Facebook yes. Thanks Again !
Your lovely poem really expresses the wistfulness of the theme. And in your protagonist's list of regrets, we learn about what happened in this love story.
Heartfelt.
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Thought I'd commented a couple of days ago, Rahul, as yours was the first entry this week. Seems blogger has swallowed up my comment. A nostalgic glimpse into the past with a wistful tone steeped in sadness. Let's hope he can start to enjoy life in the present - what life has to offer - sometime soon.
This is a very honest, from the heart in your face kind of confession. Dont we all wish we could go back in time and rectify our dreadful mistakes. Very straightforward and simple poem.
Well Rahul, you got me with that Facebook comment thingy. I don't know where they went. Onto fb probably, but it caught me!
ReplyDeleteReally enjoyed your poem. Lovely emotion, yet sad.
Denise
Hey Denise , Thanks for visiting and encouraging.Thanks a lot.The Facebook comments are visible to me !!!! Anyways they went to Facebook yes.
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A lovely poem, evocative, full of regret but hopeful of the new journey to be undertaken and learning from previous mistakes that have been made.
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DeleteBeautiful and touching... :) :)
ReplyDeleteBest wishes to you.
Thankew simran
Deletegreat narration indeed
ReplyDeletemesmerising..truly
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot
ReplyDeleteSo much regret, so sad.
ReplyDeleteA nice poem of regrets, but you only hint at mistakes. For this entry, I was expecting something more pointed. Nevertheless, nice job.
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DeleteAh DvD! That was a very evocative poem!
ReplyDeleteHi Rahul,
ReplyDeleteBeautiful prose, heartfelt regret and knowing the mistakes too late. Ah, hindsight can hurt!
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Loved it Rahul ... Regret is the most difficult, painful emotion – especially in love. Your brought out the pain very well with your words ...
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DeleteYour poem evokes many thoughts,we all have regrets probably;but hindsight is easy& foresight gets muddled with the intrusion of ego & emotions.
ReplyDeleteThankew Indu Ji !!!!!
DeleteSimple yet heart felt, loved your regrets :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot dear
DeleteSad. But lovely lines. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for your visit and thanks for ur words
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Dear Rahul,
ReplyDeleteYour lovely poem really expresses the wistfulness of the theme. And in your protagonist's list of regrets, we learn about what happened in this love story.
Heartfelt.
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Anna
Three things I could have done better
thankew so much !!
DeleteThought I'd commented a couple of days ago, Rahul, as yours was the first entry this week. Seems blogger has swallowed up my comment. A nostalgic glimpse into the past with a wistful tone steeped in sadness. Let's hope he can start to enjoy life in the present - what life has to offer - sometime soon.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for coming on my blog and for your words
DeleteNice write on those things we wished we could have done better ~
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot
DeleteThis is a very honest, from the heart in your face kind of confession.
ReplyDeleteDont we all wish we could go back in time and rectify our dreadful mistakes.
Very straightforward and simple poem.